Script Client Feedback And Revised Draft Post Client Feedback

• The script that I submitted as a client draft still needed some alterations these are as follows.
• Although each sense has a brief description of location it needs to be more detailed. To be able to set the tone and style of each scene just through the script.
• Some of the script was formatted incorrectly. for example 'interviewer' does not appear as a character heading
• The description of 'dark warehouse' wasn't enough
• Needs shot type for milord legal wall scene
• "pictures appearing across the screen" is too vague 

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