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documenting the life of 2 graffiti writers till they got caught.
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Idea is interesting. concept needs to be well explained because a large section of audience will not fully understand otherwise.
Questions need to be tailored to created a narrative story.
Think about the order questions are asked and the responses that you would expect.
Show a lot of pictures to break up long interviews
Focus on sound when filming outdoors
Make sure characters are well introduced.
Suggests showing contasts between the 2 characters through filming techniques
Show newspaper clipping and news reports
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